That's my first blog. I'm open to any comment, but please not too harsh.
Thursday, August 21, 2014
It has been nearly a month since I arrived in America, the big melting pot. This mysterious democratic country gave me a huge unforgettable impression and amazed me in so many ways. When I walked in the street, I could smell the fragrance of diversified cultures and felt their steady footstep towards future. The warm words, the polite gestures, the confident smells, everything seems to be so soothing and wonderful. The Webb School is even better. There is a marvellous campus, incredible curriculums, considerate dorm parents, etc. These elements made me feel not homesick at all. Instead of that, I found that this was a place for me to achieve my goal and create a better life. Well, maybe this is also related to my characteristics. Independence, that's what I have been trying to get. These days, I had pretty much a basic understanding of United States, which kept me thinking about the differences between American and Chinese, which is a complex question that includes social systems, politics, education, population.etc. It's a little bit earlier for a student at my age to figure it out. But experiencing two completely different things is awesome and exciting. Therefore, I'm going to dig hard and study effectively. I hope I will have four fruitful years here.
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Hi, Henry! Your writing is well-organized and you have a good vocabulary. However, your English grammar is weak. Did you proofread?? Please take some time to correct this on your own. Please let me know once you have revised it, and I might give you a better grade. 15/20
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